Beattie-
1. Good Use of Lightning
2. I liked that you had both sides of the argument
1. I would say try and improve the volume on your interviewees
Bierbaum-
1. Good to go back and forth between interviewees and pictures
2. Nice use of experts
1. Should get the names of Interviewees correct
Chareonjitt-
1. Good use of live gaming feed
2. Good angle for the story
1. Should not cover interviewees faces
Hassan-
1. Nice Titles
2. Liked the live game
1. Should have increased volume for interviewees
Hengel-
1. Nice B-Roll
2. Liked the Titles
1. Should have the questions in story
Hernandez-
1. Liked that you used school official as well as student
2. Good that you asked multiple questions
1. Last B-roll did not relate very well
Hoffman-
1. Liked how you asked a question once and panned through interviewees
2. Liked the B-roll descriptions
1. Could have had more questions to ask
Kent-
1. Nice use of expert
2. Nice job with school kid
1. No sound with stand up
Keohavong-
1. Nice use of expert
2. Way to get both sides
1. Need to shorten the length
Kerber-
1. Nice use of B-roll
2. Nice Title
1. No Stand up, Or any other talking
Krueger-
1. Liked the live game
2. Good overlap in interviews
1. Contradicted the interviewees by saying they play good defense when they said they play no defense and all offense
Kuhn-
1. Liked that you used clips from the movie
2. Nice stand up closer trying to get people to attend
1. Could have gotten more interviews
McAlpine-
1. Good use of multiple interviews
2. Nice Titles
1. Could have cut some parts that were not needed
Meckley-
1. Good job getting multiple interviews
2. Liked the live video feed
1. Good have gotten a better angle or more in depth
Nystuen-
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Thursday, January 21, 2010
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